FICTION: The Devil's Intern by Donna Hosie

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At a glance: paranormal, young adult, humour 


From Goodreads

Seventeen-year-old Mitchell discovers a time-travel device that will allow him to escape his internship in Hell's accounting office and return to Earth, but his plans to alter the circumstances of his own death take an unexpected turn when his three closest friends in Hell insist on accompanying him back to the land of the living.

Luna comments

Four years after his death, Mitchell Johnson works in Hell's accounting department as an intern. The excessive number of deaths causes chaos as The Devil tries to reduce costs. (That's not important to the plotline, but I found it funny.) Life in Hell isn't all that interesting, & he finds himself missing being alive. But, in overhearing his superiors' plans for cost reduction, Mitchell discovers that his boss has a Viciseometer, a time-travelling device that he can potentially use to prevent his death.

Tagging along with him are his friends: Alfarin, Elinor & Medusa, all looking for a chance to change their deaths as well.

I picked this book up from my library after reading the description, which made the book sound a lot better than it does from the brief summaries above. It's now in this funny place where it's not as good as I hoped (or, more accurately, it's not the story I thought it'd be), but I'm not disappointed, either. I quite enjoyed the climax & the ending.

The plot started off almost typical. Nothing unforeseen really happened - it started off with visiting the characters' deaths in turn & viewing them. To be honest, after they left Hell & went back into the world of the living, I spent about half the time wondering when it'll get to the good part. I only kept reading because it wasn't that I couldn't stand reading it any more.

But then things start to come together. There are allusions to time paradoxes, & the way the 'past' & 'future' are intertwined when time travel happens. I found the the last quarter of the book very interesting, because that's when I started to get the sense of wanting to know the answers. It's a real shame that the hint of there being a much bigger picture wasn't introduced earlier (or it could have been that I was too obtuse to pick up on it).

The characters felt rather average - I won't say that the characterisation was poor, but nothing about them really stood out. (This may or may not be an aftereffect of recent anime-watching, in which the story is much longer & more visual & hence characterisation may be 'easier'.)

Oh, I also found it pretty funny. That's always good =]

Closing

I really liked the premise of this story, & I do think that the story itself is interesting - it just spent a while actually getting to the interesting bit (for me, anyway).

But, having said that, apparently this is the first in a series. Now that I know how everything's set up, I'm rather keen to see where Hosie will go next.